Category Archives: Writing Fiction

Killing the Cliché

Which story would you prefer?

Story A:  “Found Footage” film about a group of teens visiting the abandoned insane asylum.

Story B: “Found Footage” film about a group of teens breaking into a highly restricted military hanger.

Despite the overdone found footage genre I bet a number of you would still prefer Story B.  The insane asylum, or abandoned prison, etc., has been overdone to death.

Definition:

Cliché – when a writing tool is used over again to a degree that it loses it’s sense of appeal.

What made the original terminator so great?  For one thing it was creating an ending that seemed at the time to defy a typical ending.  When the truck crashed into the terminator and exploded into flames – everyone thought that was it.  Ending it then would have been okay but the story defied the typical cliché and progressed into a new climax – now the terminator was walking and Kyle Reese and Sarah Conner were on the run again!

How come hitting someone on the head always renders the person unconscious?  Wouldn’t it be refreshing for once if you hit someone on the head and instead of falling outright or (the other cliché) not having any effect – stumble in pain?  Or why is it that women are always victims and men are always perpetrators?  Or at least they are depicted that way over and over again.

Clichés can ruin a good story – to do away with them is ask: “what’s too normal about this?”  If it is – get rid of it!